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2nd attempt at drawing an eye. Decided to draw a different shape this time just for comparison with the other. Erm eyebrow is pretty bad, but I'm trying to improve next time round :) All opinions appreciated!
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Mood: Joy !Silvertwilightmoon Aug 7, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
You can tell you've improved immediately. I love the way you put in the light for the eye and carried it into the pupil aha i noticed allot of people don't always do that. You're on a really good streak keep it up.
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~ThanasisTzortzis Jun 24, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
Yeah the improvement is noticeable!, like the right reflections and especially i like that you seem more confident drawing it than the previous one!Well done keep up the good progress!
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Mood: Wow! ~Mimisilvertongue Jun 21, 2012  Student General Artist
this eye look now so much better, keep doing the good work awesome!!
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~AllyThompson Jun 19, 2012
Much better, keep it up
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Mood: Happy ~espanta-pajaros Jun 19, 2012
Heyhey, so you commented on one of my pictures and asked that I look at yours, so here I am.
This eye is a great improvement on the previous one and I can truly see that you are off to a good start. As proven here, practice makes perfect. As for advice, I would say that you can focus on hard lines and soft lines (for instance, the eyebrow looks good because it is in fact a lot of hairs (hard lines), but then lines like the folds above and below the eye could be softer and more just kind of a shade.)
Otherwise, just keep going, you're gonna be great. Also, I like that you made the reflection in the eye more obvious this time. :)
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~DavidEvz Jun 19, 2012  Hobbyist
Thank you :) I get where you're coming from. I need to work more on the shading of the folds, and take better care as you said with the soft and hard lines :) I'm glad you think this one is better :) I think it's better than the last one too!
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!GlamorousNecrophilia Jun 18, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
MUCH better :heart:
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~DavidEvz Jun 19, 2012  Hobbyist
Thank you :P
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!GlamorousNecrophilia Jun 19, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
You're very welcome <3
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=JophesXI Jun 18, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Keep up the good work! :)
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